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Narrative Second Draft

Narrative Second Draft

Q Post a revised second draft of your narrative. As you revise your second draft, be sure to consider the feedback you received from an instructor or tutor, or classmates, as well as anyone else who read your draft. If feedback feels helpful or you hear similar things from numerous readers, it is usually good indication that a revision on that point would make the writing more effective. Here are some other things to consider doing to help your revision: • Reread the narrative assignment description: Flash Narrative Drafting Assignment Actions • Read the peer review(s) that you received on your first draft: • Revisit notes you took and feedback (whether written or verbal) that you received during the workshops. • Use the SLCC Student Writing Center (http://www.slcc.edu/swc/ (Links to an external site.)) as a source for feedback. You can receive feedback on your paper in-person or through email. And remember this is not the final draft. The final draft will be completed for the final portfolio at the end of the semester.

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The farewell had been tough, a man named Antonio had gone through a challenging time after having to separate from his wife and son. Angola, his country, where he lived with his family was invaded by a communist government. A government full of injustices, among many the most unjust, was having to let his family go, for their own good. He lived off what he worked day and night, saving every penny.